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   제 목   Writing homework(21.4.19)    상 태  
   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-04-19
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  Q'What are some jobs that you think would be fun? Why? A: I think the voice actor is fun. Because it don't have to make my face come out. -특별한 거 없어. Nothing special. -난 수족관 갈 거거든.같이 갈래? I'll go to the aquarium. Will you go with me? -물론이지. 나도 정말 가고 싶. Sure. I want to go too.
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Q'What are some jobs that you think would be fun? Why?

​A: I think the voice actor is fun, because I don't have to show my face.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

 

-특별한 거 없어.

Nothing special. (correct)

-난 수족관 갈 거거든.같이 갈래?


=> Your sentences have correct grammatical structure, but these have the correct usage/expression.

~I'm going to the aquarium. Will you join me?

-물론이지. 나도 정말 가고 싶.

~Sure, I really want to go there.