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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2021-04-19
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  A. How can using social networking sites invade your privacy? The social networking sites were contaminated by many weird commercials. so I try not to use it as possible as I can. B. Make these sentences into English. (04/19/21)[ (04/19/21) -난 내 머리를 짧게 잘랐다. I cut my hair short. -우리는 멀리 가지 않았다. We didn't go far. -그 새는 높이 날았다. The bird flew high.
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A. How can using social networking sites invade your privacy?

The social networking sites were contaminated by many weird commercials. so I try not to use it as possible as I can. -> The social networking sites are contaminated by many weird commercials, so I try not to use it as much as possible.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/19/21)

-난 내 머리를 짧게 잘랐다.

I cut my hair short. √

 

-우리는 멀리 가지 않았다.

We didn't go far. √​

 

 

-그 새는 높이 날았다.

The bird flew high.​ √​