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   제 목   What is the role of Malaysia’s king?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-03-07
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  A.) What is the role of Malaysia’s king? Why? Please elaborate on your answer. Like other constitutional monarchies, Malaysia's king also has few powers. But it is the head of state. So it represents the state foreignly, which can be said to be its role. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/06/24) 1. 외상매출은 자격조건을 갖춘 고객들에 한해 가능합니다. Credit trading is available only for those who are qualified. 2. 귀사의 재정 상태를 한번 확인해 봐야겠습니다. We need to verify your financial condition. 3. 매출을 늘리기 위해 이 제도를 도입했습니다. We introduced this system to increase sales.
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​A.) What is the role of Malaysia’s king? Why? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 Like other constitutional monarchies, Malaysia's king also has few powers.

 But it is the head of state.

 So it represents the state foreignly, which can be said to be its role.    ✔️​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/06/24)

 

1. 외상매출은 자격조건을 갖춘 고객들에 한해 가능합니다.

    Credit trading is available only for those who are qualified.  ✔️

​

2. 귀사의 재정 상태를 한번 확인해 봐야겠습니다.

    We need to verify your financial condition.  ✔️

​

3. 매출을 늘리기 위해 이 제도를 도입했습니다.

   We introduced this system to increase sales.  ✔️

 

•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.