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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-26
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  A.) What can be done to protect numbats? Please elaborate on your answer. A speices' suvival is the matter beyond humans. All that humans can do will be preventing poaching and habitat loss. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/23/24) 1. 제 은행계좌로 온라인 송금해주세요. Please remit payment online to my bank account. 2. 송금했다는 것을 확인해주실 수 있나요? Could you confirm your remittance? 3. 귀사가 8 월 13 일에 3 만달러를 보냈다고 되어 있네요. Your company is confirmed to have remitted 30,000 dollars on August 13.
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A.) What can be done to protect numbats? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A speices' suvival is  the matter  beyond humans.

All that humans can do will be preventing poaching and habitat loss.

 

=>  A species survival is the matter beyond humans.

All that humans can do is prevent poaching and habitat loss.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/23/24)

 

1. 제 은행계좌로 온라인 송금해주세요.

Please remit payment online to my bank account.  ✔️

​2. 송금했다는 것을 확인해주실 수 있나요?

Could you confirm your remittance?  ✔️

3. 귀사가 8 월 13 일에 3 만달러를 보냈다고 되어 있네요.

Your company is confirmed to have remitted 30,000 dollars on August 13.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.