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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-08-01
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  A. Tell about your favorite story book. My favorite story book is Heungbu and Nolbu.(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heungbu_and_Nolbu) It is mainly about kindness. Heungbu and Nolbu are brothers. They were rich but Nolbu got it all. Heungbu became poor but he didn't gave up. One day, a bird came to Heungbu's house, but its leg hurt. Heungbu recovered it. After a few months, the bird came again with 'pumpkin'(actually it's not a pumpkin, but I don't know what it is in English) seed. There are lots of food and money inside the 'pumpkin'. While, Nolbu heard that and he wanted to recieve the 'pumpkins'. So, he broke a bird's leg and recovered it. Soon, the bird brought the seed and there are bad things inside the 'pumpkin'. It shows that being rude makes me bad and being kind makes me good. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/27/23) 1. 우와, 눈이 온다.눈사람 만들자. Wow, it snows. Let's make a snowman. 2. 와! 눈이 온다.눈사람 만들자.(Is it same to the 1st sentence? I'll just write it the same.) Wow, it snows. Let's maek a snowman. 3. 그리고 눈싸움도 하자. And let's fight with snowballs.
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A. Tell about your favorite story book.

My favorite story book is Heungbu and Nolbu.(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heungbu_and_Nolbu)

It is mainly about kindness. Heungbu and Nolbu are brothers. They were rich but Nolbu got it all. Heungbu became poor but he didn't gave up. 

One day, a bird came to Heungbu's house, but its leg hurt. Heungbu recovered it. After a few months, the bird came again with 'pumpkin'(actually it's not a pumpkin, but I don't know what it is in English) seed. There are lots of food and money inside the 'pumpkin'.

While, Nolbu heard that and he wanted to receive the 'pumpkins'. So, he broke a bird's leg and recovered it. Soon, the bird brought the seed and there are bad things inside the 'pumpkin'.

It shows that being rude makes me bad and being kind makes me good.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/27/23)

1. 우와, 눈이 온다.눈사람 만들자.

Wow, it snows. Let's make a snowman.

2. 와! 눈이 온다.눈사람 만들자.(Is it same to the 1st sentence? I'll just write it the same.)

Wow, it snows. Let's make a snowman.

3. 그리고 눈싸움도 하자.

And let's fight with snowballs.

*** Well done Tae Gyu.. Keep it up!​