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   제 목   Do you want to travel in a submarine?    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-08-08
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  A. Do you want to travel in a submarine? Why or why not? Yes, I do. I want to see underwater, and a sumbmarine is good at diving. B. Make these sentences into English. (08/03/23) 1. 저기 봐! 호수가 얼음판이 됐어. Look over there! The lake is frozen. 2. 우와, 신기하다! 스케이트 타자. Wow, amazing!. Let's skate. 3. 나 스케이트 잘 타 I'm good at skating.
   교정내용
 

A. Do you want to travel in a submarine? Why or why not?

Yes, I do. I want to see underwater, and a submarine is good at diving.

Better: Yes, I do want to see underwater and I want to ride a submarine.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/03/23)

1. 저기 봐! 호수가 얼음판이 됐어.

Look over there! The lake is frozen.

2. 우와, 신기하다! 스케이트 타자.

Wow, amazing!. Let's skate.

3. 나 스케이트 잘 타

I'm good at skating.​ 

Well done Tae Gyu.. thank you for always doing your best. Good job!!!!