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   제 목   Should the bodies found in peat bogs be displayed in museums?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-03-14
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  A.) Should the bodies found in peat bogs be displayed in museums? Please elaborate on your answer. The peat bodies are not artifacts but human remains, which means that they must not be objectified. So they should not be displayed in museums. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/13/24) 1. 오늘 발주하면 언제쯤 상품을 받아볼 수 있나요? When could I get the goods if I order today? 2. 발주의 수량에 따라 다릅니다. It depends on the quantity placed. 3. 5 백 대 주문까지는 재고로 해결할 수 있습니다. Up to 500 units would be acceptable with current stock.
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​A.) Should the bodies found in peat bogs be displayed in museums? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The peat bodies are not artifacts but human remains, which means that they must not be objectified.

So they should not be displayed in museums.  ✔️​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/13/24)

 

1. 오늘 발주하면 언제쯤 상품을 받아볼 수 있나요?

When could I get the goods if I order today?  ✔️

​2. 발주의 수량에 따라 다릅니다.

It depends on the quantity placed.  ✔️

​3. 5 백 대 주문까지는 재고로 해결할 수 있습니다.

Up to 500 units would be acceptable with current stock. ✔️

 

•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​