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   제 목   Would you like to climb the world’s highest mountains?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-08-21
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  A) Would you like to climb the world’s highest mountains? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. Although I like climbing a mountain, the height doesn't matter to me. I will not feel inclined to climb a mountain just because it is the world's highest. B) Make these sentences into English. (08/04/23) 1. 중국에 공장이 세 개 있습니다. We have three factories in China. 2. 연간 생산량이 30 억 개입니다. Annual production is 3 billions. 3. 이 공장의 생산 한도는 10,000 개입니다. This factory's capacity is 10,000.
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A) Would you like to climb the world’s highest mountains? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Although I like climbing a mountain, the height doesn't matter to me.

I will not feel inclined to climb a mountain just because it is the world's highest.  

 

      

B) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/04/23)

 

1. 중국에 공장이 세 개 있습니다.

We have three factories in China.  

 

2. 연간 생산량이 30 억 개입니다.

Annual production is 3 billions.

=>  Annual production is 3 billion pieces.​

 

 

3. 이 공장의 생산 한도는 10,000 개입니다.

This factory's capacity is 10,000 units.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.