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   제 목   What should be done to the wastewater that nuclear power plants produce?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-08-21
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  A.) What should be done to the wastewater that nuclear power plants produce? Please elaborate on your answer. Complete removal of nuclear pollutants from the wastewater would be unexpectable. So discharging it into sea must be prevented. I think that solidifying and burying it would be the best way. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/31/23) 1. 인도의 기술자들이 저희의 정보통신 기술을 모두 맡았습니다. Indian technicians are entirely in charge of our information technology. 2. 인도에 있는 IT 회사들이 기술을 떠맡아 합니다. The IT companies in India assume technology. 3. 인도에 2,000 명이 넘는 인재를 가지고 있습니다. We have over 2,000 people of talent.
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A.) What should be done to the wastewater that nuclear power plants produce? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Complete removal of nuclear pollutants from the wastewater would be unexpectable.

So discharging it into sea must be prevented. 

I think that solidifying and burying it would be the best way.       

 

=>  Complete removal of nuclear pollutants from the wastewater would be unexpected.

So discharging it into the sea must be prevented. 

I think that solidifying and burying it would be the best way.       ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/31/23)

 

1. 인도의 기술자들이 저희의 정보통신 기술을 모두 맡았습니다.

Indian technicians are entirely in charge of our information technology.     

 

2. 인도에 있는 IT 회사들이 기술을 떠맡아 합니다.

The IT companies in India assume technology.  

 

3. 인도에 2,000 명이 넘는 인재를 가지고 있습니다.

We have over 2,000 people of talent. 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.