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   교정강사   Stella(D)O    등록일   2023-08-20
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  Today is Sunday. So I tried to go to church today as usual. But in morning, my brother seen very seek. His voice is very bad, and he is in very thick blanket. My brother was seen got cold. So I asked to my mom and I was right. He got cold. he has fever, cough. So we can`t go to church and I`m in my home. And my brother is in our sleeping room. My brother looked pitiful after a long time. But I want to go in my church. I`m very bored in my home. and I can`t go everywhere today because my brother has a fever. I hope it`s not COVID-19. today is very bad day.
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August 20th


Today is Sunday. As usual, I was planning to go to church. But in the morning, I noticed that my brother was not feeling well. His voice is very bad, and he is wrapping himself in a thick blanket. My brother was seen getting cold. So I asked my mom, and I was right. He got a cold. He has a fever and cough. So we can`t go to church, and I`m at home. And my brother is in our sleeping room. My brother looked pitiful in his situation right now. I want to go to my church. I`m very bored in my home. But I can`t go anywhere today because my brother has a fever. I hope it`s not COVID-19. Today is a very bad day.