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   제 목   Why are Great Danes expensive pets?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-10-22
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  A.) Why are Great Danes expensive pets? Please elaborate on your answer. The Great Danes are a large breed of dogs that are not aggressive. They eat a lot of food and require a large space, which costs a lot of money. Those who can endure the expense can live with them. That might be why they are called expensive pets. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/20/23) 1. 우리 제품으로 절감할 수 있는 전기량을 보여줍니다. This shows the amount of electricity which can be saved by our products. 2. 이 원형도표는 우리 주요 고객이 20 대 여성이라는 것을 보여줍니다. This pie chart shows that our main customers are women in their twenties. 3. 이 선은 총 이윤을 나타내고 이 붉은 선은 미불 부채를 나타냅니다. This line shows the total profit while this red line shows the debt to pay.
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A.) Why are Great Danes expensive pets? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Great Danes are a large breed of dogs that are not aggressive.
They eat a lot of food and require a large space, which costs a lot of money.
Those who can endure the expense can live with them.
That might be why they are called expensive pets.    ​✔​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/20/23)

 

1. 우리 제품으로 절감할 수 있는 전기량을 보여줍니다.

This shows the amount of electricity which can be saved by our products.  ✔

​

 

2. 이 원형도표는 우리 주요 고객이 20 대 여성이라는 것을 보여줍니다.

This pie chart shows that our main customers are women in their twenties.  ✔​

 

 

3. 이 선은 총 이윤을 나타내고 이 붉은 선은 미불 부채를 나타냅니다.

This line shows the total profit while this red line shows the debt to pay.  ✔

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.