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   제 목   Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-10-21
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  A.) Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own? Please elaborate on your answer. The migrant problem will not be able to be solved only by a country where migrants land first. So the EU must handle the problem. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/16/23) 1. 바꿔 말하자면, 중국은 한국과 점점 더 닮아가기 때문에 촉망되는 시장입니다. In other words, as it is getting more and more alike with Korea, China is a promising market. 2. 시장은 무르익었습니다. 즉 많은 이익을 창출해 낼 수 있다는 얘기죠. The market has grown enough, which means that a lot of profits could be earned. 3. 그들과 우리의 서비스를 비교해 보면 우리 회사가 더 월등하다는 것을 알 수 있을 것입니다. Comparing our service with theirs, you can realize our company's prominence.
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A.) Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The migrant problem will not be able to be solved only by a country where migrants land first. 

So the EU must handle the problem.   

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/16/23)

 

1. 바꿔 말하자면, 중국은 한국과 점점 더 닮아가기 때문에 촉망되는 시장입니다.

In other words, as it is getting more and more alike with Korea, 

China is a promising market.  

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  To put it in another way, China is a promising market because it's becoming more like Korea.

 

2. 시장은 무르익었습니다. 즉 많은 이익을 창출해 낼 수 있다는 얘기죠.

The market has grown enough, which means that a lot of profits could be earned.  

 

3. 그들과 우리의 서비스를 비교해 보면 우리 회사가 더 월등하다는 것을 알 수 있을 것입니다. 

Comparing our service with theirs,  you can realize our company's prominence.  

 • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.