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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-11-15
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  This is my house. This is my family photo. Wow, it`s cool. You`re a big family.
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This is my house. This is my family photo.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  This is my home and this is my family.

 

Wow, it`s cool.   

 

You`re a big family.   

=>  You have a large family.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.