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   제 목   Nov. 7th Homework by Taegyu    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2023-11-07
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  A. How can after school programs improve your life as a student? After school programs improve my life from many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter(In my opinion). B. Make these sentences into English. (11/07/23) 1. 피자야. 우리 피자 먹을래? It's pizza. Shall we eat some pizza? 2. 우리 도시락 싸왔잖아.피자는 다음에 먹자. We packed our lunch. Let's eat pizza next time. 3. 안타깝다. It's so sad.
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A. How can after school programs improve your life as a student?

After school programs improve my life from many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter(In my opinion).

Corrected: 

After-school programs improve my life in many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter (in my opinion).

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/07/23)

1. 피자야. 우리 피자 먹을래?

It's pizza. Shall we eat some pizza?✔

2. 우리 도시락 싸왔잖아.피자는 다음에 먹자.

We packed our lunch. Let's eat pizza next time. ✔​

 

3. 안타깝다.

It's so sad. ✔​

Thank you so much for answering your homework Tae Gyu. Keep it up!​