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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-11-21
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  A.) What can museums do to teach people about ancient cultures? Please elaborate on your answer. Museums have many historic relics or artifacts which are difficult to find relations between one another. Displaying them by themes will help people to understand their historic meaning. B.) Make these sentences into English. (11/20/23) 1. 미국 시장은 큰 가능성을 안고 있습니다. American market has big potentiality. 2. 인도에서 커피에 대한 수요가 늘고 있습니다. The demand for coffee in India is increasing. 3. 인도에서 높은 수요를 기대하고 있습니다. We anticipate high demand in India.
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A.) What can museums do to teach people about ancient cultures? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Museums have many historic relics or artifacts which are difficult to find relations between one another.
Displaying them by themes will help people to understand their historic meaning.​

 

=>  Museums have many historic relics or artifacts that are difficult to find in relation to one another.

Displaying them by themes will help people to understand their historical meaning.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/20/23)

1. 미국 시장은 큰 가능성을 안고 있습니다.

 American market has big potentiality.

=>  The American market has a big potential.

 

2. 인도에서 커피에 대한 수요가 늘고 있습니다.

 The demand for coffee in India is increasing.  

3. 인도에서 높은 수요를 기대하고 있습니다.

 We anticipate high demand in India. 


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.