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   교정강사   Vanessa(D)    등록일   2021-06-14
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  I have a good weekend. I play with my brother and i play a big puzzle. it was very fun and happy. My little brother said me "mingo". "Mingo" is the dinosaurs are come to the earth. He hit the dinosaurs.
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I had a good weekend. I played with my brother and we played a big puzzle. It was very fun and we're happy!

My little brother said that "Mingo" to me. Mingo means a dinosaur. He hits the dinosaurs.