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   제 목   What factors do you think contribute to the citizens’ happiness?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-04-16
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  A.) What factors do you think contribute to the citizens’ happiness? Please elaborate on your answer. Happiness could not be defined objectively. That is because it varies with individuals. So discussing any factors of happiness could not interest me. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/15/24) 1. 화장실에서 가까운 통로쪽 좌석을 원합니다. I want an aisle seat near a toilet. 2. 왕복 가격입니까? Is this the fare for a return ticket? 3. 제 예약확인 번호는 E7009GA 입니다. My confirmation number is E7009GA.
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A.) What factors do you think contribute to the citizens’ happiness? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Happiness could not be defined objectively.

That is because it varies with individuals.

So discussing any factors of happiness could not interest me.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/15/24)

 

1. 화장실에서 가까운 통로쪽 좌석을 원합니다.

 I want an aisle seat near a toilet.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  I prefer an aisle seat near the bathroom.

 

2. 왕복 가격입니까?

 Is this the fare for a return ticket?

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  Is this the roundtrip price?

 

3. 제 예약확인 번호는 E7009GA 입니다.

 My confirmation number is E7009GA.  ✔️

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.