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   제 목   Should the museum workers try to find out how the Miniscalchis family got the astrolabe?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-03-27
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  A.) Should the museum workers try to find out how the Miniscalchis family got the astrolabe? Please elaborate on your answer. A thing's story will make it more valuable. How the Miniscalchis got the astrolabe would increase its value. So the museum workers' endeavor to find out would be worth applauding. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/27/24) 1. 검사기준을 강화하고 리드 타임을 늘리세요. You better intensify the inspection criteria and lengthen the lead time. 2. 정시 인도를 약속하실 수 있나요? Could you be certain of on-time delivery? 3. 성수기에 맞춰서 물건이 필요합니다. We need things in response to peak season.
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A.) Should the museum workers try to find out how the Miniscalchis family got the astrolabe? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A thing's story will make it more valuable.

How the Miniscalchis got the astrolabe would increase its value.

So the museum workers' endeavor to find out would be worth applauding.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/27/24)

 

1. 검사기준을 강화하고 리드 타임을 늘리세요.

You better intensify the inspection criteria and lengthen the lead time.   ✔️

 

2. 정시 인도를 약속하실 수 있나요?

Could you be certain of on-time delivery?  ✔️

 

3. 성수기에 맞춰서 물건이 필요합니다.

We need things in response to peak season.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​​