(05/31/21)

-6명을 위한 테이블을 줄래요?

 Can you give us a table for six people? -> Can I have a table for six?

-소포 언제 보냈어?

 When did you send the box? -> When did you send the package?

-조금만 더 줄래요?

 Can you give me some more? -> Can I have a little more?

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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