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   제 목   Should a country’s president have social media accounts?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-04-02
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  A.) Should a country’s president have social media accounts? Please elaborate on your answer. A country's president has a very powerful influence. His or her words or behavior would affect many people. So during the tenure, the president must abstain from social media activities. B.) Make these sentences into English. 03/28/23) 1. 지정된 계좌로 송금했습니다 . The remittance was made to the said account. 2. 화요일까지 귀사로 2 만 달러를 보내겠습니다 . 20,000 dollars will be transferred to your company by Tuesday. 3. 경리 쪽에 확인해야 합니다. You must refer to the accounting department.
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A.) Should a country’s president have social media accounts? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 A country's president has a very powerful influence.

 His or her words or behavior would affect many people.

 So during the tenure, the president must abstain from social media activities.  ✔​

 

 

  B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

03/28/23)

 

1. 지정된 계좌로 송금했습니다 .

The remittance was made to the said account.   ✔

​

 

2. 화요일까지 귀사로 2 만 달러를 보내겠습니다 .

20,000 dollars will be transferred to your company by Tuesday.  ✔

​

 3. 경리 쪽에 확인해야 합니다.

You must refer to the accounting department.  

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  ​We must confirm with our accountants.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​