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   제 목   What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-12-20
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  (12/19/22) A.) What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why? Please elaborate on your answer. Animals listed in CITES Appendix 1 can't be traded. Volcano rabbits and Mekong catfish are examples. Those remind me of bears carrying a crescent pattern on the chest. They are called 'Asiatic Black Bears' They should be put in Appendix 1. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/19/22) 1. 불량품을 감지하는 센서가 있습니다. We have a sensor detecting faulty goods. 2. 자회사에서 포장재료를 공급합니다. A subsidiary company supplies packaging materials. 3. 짐은 그게 전부인가요? Do you have no other baggage?
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(12/19/22)

 

A.) What animals would you put in Appendix 1 and why? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Animals listed in CITES Appendix 1 can't be traded.

Volcano rabbits and Mekong catfish are examples.

Those remind me of bears carrying a crescent pattern on the chest.

They are called 'Asiatic Black Bears' 

They should be put in Appendix 1.  ✔

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  B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/19/22)

 

1. 불량품을 감지하는 센서가 있습니다.

   We have a sensor detecting faulty goods.  ✔

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2. 자회사에서 포장재료를 공급합니다.

   A subsidiary company supplies packaging materials.    ✔

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  3. 짐은 그게 전부인가요?

   Do you have no other baggage?  ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.