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   제 목   How important is the art.    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-12-08
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  Art is important because we can communicate information and we can make social statement. Without art we can't make art works. So it's why the art is important
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Art is important because we can communicate, gain information and we can make social statement.


Without art, we can't make art works.

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So that's why the art is important.

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