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   제 목   What I know about war between Russia and Ukraine.    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-09-06
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  The war started at 2022 February 24th. And the start of the war the Russia needed Ukraines territory but Ukraine didn't give so the War started.(I think) And the War is Executioning these days.
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  CORRECTION:

The war started in 2022 on February 24th.


The reason for the war is that the Russians needed Ukraine's territory but Ukrainian didn't allow them.

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So that's how I think it started.


And the war continues up to these days. ​

 

REMEMBER:

There is no word such as "Executioning " instead we can use the word "Executing".

Be careful with the proper capitalization.