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   제 목   homework Christine(02/10/22)    상 태  
   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2022-02-15
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  A. How do onions make people cry? The acidic gas makes people cry. B. Make these sentences into English. (02/10/22) -천만에요. 안전 운전 하세요. -서둘러야 겠어요, 시간이 없어요.졸업식이 벌써 시작 했겠네. -축하합니다, 6학년 여러분! 여러분들은 꼭 기억하세요.졸업은 끝이 아니라 시작입니다. 들어 줘서 고맙습니다. -My pleasure. Have a nice driving. -We have to hurry. We don't have much time. The graduation will start already. -Congratulations. Sixth graders! Remember. The graduation is the beginning, not the end. Thank you for listening.
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A. How do onions make people cry?

The acidic gas makes people cry. ✔

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B. Make these sentences into English.

(02/10/22)

-천만에요. 안전 운전 하세요.

My pleasure. Have a nice driving.​ Corrected pattern=> You're welcome. Drive safely.

 

-서둘러야 겠어요, 시간이 없어요.졸업식이 벌써 시작 했겠네.

We have to hurry. We don't have much time. The graduation will start already.​ Corrected pattern=>​ Oh, no! We have to hurry. There's no time. There ceremony has already started.

 

-축하합니다, 6학년 여러분! 여러분들은 꼭 기억하세요.졸업은 끝이 아니라 시작입니다. 들어 줘서 고맙습니다.

Congratulations. Sixth graders! Remember. The graduation is the beginning, not the end. Thank you for listening. Corrected pattern=>​Congratulations, Sixth Grade. You should remember. Graduation is not an end, it's a beginning. Thank you for listening.​