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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-12-17
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  A. Have you ever donated blood? Do you think technology will help humans live longer and longer? Yes, I did. I was proud of myself because I could help someone in my teenage days, but now I am getting older and my health is not good. I am pity to hear the news that many patients need blood for cure but there aren't enough amount to cover them due to pandemic virus. B. Make these sentences into English. (12/17/21) -그녀는 눈이 너무 높아. She expects too much from a guy -돈벼락 맞는 건 시간 문제라고. It's just matter of time before you hit the jackpot. -그는 돈을 물 쓰듯 해요. He spends money like water.
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A. Have you ever donated blood? Do you think technology will help humans live longer and longer?

Yes, I did.

I was proud of myself because I could help someone in my teenage days, but now I am getting older and my health is not good.

I pity to hear the news that many patients need blood to be cured but there isn’t enough amount to cover them due to pandemic virus.

 

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(12/17/21)

-그녀는 눈이 너무 높아.

She expects too much from a guy. -> She's too picky.

 

 

-돈벼락 맞는 건 시간 문제라고.

It's just matter of time before you hit the jackpot. -> It's only a matter of time before I strike it rich.

 

 

-그는 돈을 물 쓰듯 해요.

He spends money like water. -> He was throwing money around.

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them.